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    Another Pre-Super Bowl Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

     




    Here's this week's heap of haikus:




     

    Negotiations
    are often up in the air,
    just stay on the line.



    (Thanks to Kristina Rebelo for the use of her photograph)

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    tanka haiku: Don't be afraid, for
    we walk in the footsteps of
    those who've gone before.

    We'll all be re-united
    on a new and sunlit shore.



    Yeah, I know.  But who knew the lyrics to "When the Saints Go Marching In" could be re-worked into a tanka haiku?  Thanks Pete Seeger for the inspiration.


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    Resting in the shade,
    young men tried to make sense of
    the horrors of war.


    From the battle of Kwajalein Island which began 70 years ago (January 31, 1944.)  My dad was there and took this photo.



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    After the rainstorm,
    the park looked so lush and green,
    he wished his youth back.


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    Fitful nights will end.
    Sleep will overtake sadness.
    When I wake, you're gone.



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    Lying in a field,
    my ancestors looked at clouds
    and dreamt of my life.



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    Youth is insistent,
    while old age negotiates ...
    it was ever thus.



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    Seldom will you see
    a second thought that dances
    in the morning breeze.



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    He was so sleepy,
    he spread the raspberry jam
    on both toast and hand.



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    Shadows thrown upon
    a brick wall by passing cars,
    flee into doorways.



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    If you choose to use
    a magnifying glass, know
    that you will find flaws.


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    Two homeless men sat
    on a bench, discussing the
    State of the Union.



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    A doe hid behind
    a fir tree's branches, and watched
    two children playing.



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    Moon behind the clouds,
    dew forms on the meadow grass,
    we whisper, "Goodnight" ...




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    My wish for you is:
    Your quest never ends, and your
    heart ever widens.


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    Sometimes an echo
    from a life you left behind,
    will catch up to you.




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    A freshly waxed floor,
    an over-eager puppy …
    viral video.



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    tanka haiku:


    Where is that diner?
    The one that serves those pancakes
    with ice cream on top ...

    Near the junction of Route Three
    and your cardiac bypass.



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     ... Then the blushing bride
    ripped off her dress and whispered,
    “Wanna consummate?”




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    double haiku:

    When I was young, I
    looked in strangers' faces to
    find the familiar.

    Now that I am old,
    I look in strangers' faces
    to find the unique.


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    Peach oleanders
    overwhelm the small vase on
    my kitchen table.


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    tanka haiku: Curious ... Have you
    ever seen a mailman that
    likes to stamp his feet?

    Is he footing the bill, or
    just pushing the envelope?


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    She ran down the street,
    with tears streaming down her face,
    dogs nipping her heels.


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    The dress rehearsal
    ran over three hours ... without
    an intermission.



    Alternate take:

    The dress rehearsal
    ran over three hours ... and limped
    the rest of the way.


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    What you are drawn to,
    has within it, the lesson
    that you need to learn.



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    The seas might seize them,
    (a flea might flee them), but hearts
    captured, enraptured.



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    To be fair, we must
    pity the TV pundits.
    Like Brooks, they babble.


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    Singing counterpoint
    lets harmonious couples
    blend their diff’rent tunes. 

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    Walking through meadows
    just before sunrise, is worth
    some wet trouser cuffs.


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    Can we ever let
    Love truly know our hearts? Must
    shadows’ hints suffice?



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    His mind would wander,
    but it knew not to stray far
    from the neighborhood.


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    It’s said, (by me), that
    mischief stalks the mundane to
    make it more human.



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    That's all for this week.    Thanks for stopping by.



     

    Comments

    Oh delightful!

    You know pigeons stick around here all winter.

    Dumber than most ducks and geese. hahahaha

    They fly into windows and die.

    hahaha

    I will be back.

    I like this!


    Thank you for your haiku.  I liked the one about the 2 homeless discussing the state of the Union.  


    Dreams are a city,

    Rooms become trains and kisses.

    The space between trees.


    moat, you are an excellent teacher.  Thank you.

     

    A city of dreams

    adventure hides underground

    the space between trains.

     

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    Through the train windows,

    I see her on the platform.

    Watch the closing doors.

     

    Practice teaches us,

    Plus we learn from each other.

    The pleasure is mine.


     

    No enlightenment

    is reached without questions asked.

    Teach and you shall learn.
     

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    Through the train's windows,
    I see, on the platform bench,
    my g*d-d*mned briefcase.

     

     


    Riding the Local,

    I saw her on the Express;

    Parallel process.

     

    When the questions start,

    Everybody gets pissed off.

    It is personal.


     

    In most arguments,

    somebody will get pissed off ...

    and someone, pissed on.

     


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