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Another Star-Spangled Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon


 

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4th of July-ku:  

The rockets' red glare,
bombs bursting in air, gave proof
that fireworks are cool.

(3rd line re-write for the diphthong challenged:  "fireworks are cool.")

 

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A Rainbow-Filled Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

 


 

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tanka haiku:

Crowded Conveyance;
Two women, a dog, a bike,
a small child and me.

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A Fadin' Away Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

 

 

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I'm fading away,
Slowly, inexorably ...
I can't help but laugh.

 

 

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A Semi-Theatrical Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

 

 

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I would strain to hit
high notes, she would patiently
get me to relax.

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A Happy, Humid Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

 

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double haiku:

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Another Getaway Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

 

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With hands o’er hearts and
eyes on the flag, a bugle
plays a mournful “Taps”.

 


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A Friendly Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon


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double haiku:

 

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A Friday Afternoon in Bloom at the Haikulodeon


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When you have a lot
that's on your mind, let your day
begin quietly.

 


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